Look up
Look on the brighter side
Look to the sky
Do what you want to do
Be who you want to be
If someone knocks you down
If they do you wrong
Get back up
Hold your ground
Keep moving forward
Keep looking up
Never look back
And don’t look down
I like the message here. So positive. You should add one more stanza.
ReplyDeleteI think your poem has a really awesome message. Maybe change the very last line. "Never look back" and "Don't look down" is kind of just saying the same thing over again.
ReplyDeleteI think your peom is awesome. I like the posotive nature.
ReplyDeleteI would suggest that you keep the overwhelming inspiration down to a minimum of one billion times any author has been able to achieve ever, for this godlike prose is simply impossible to read without going blind from the beauty.
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