Wednesday, February 8, 2012

People are Animals
Some are strong
While others are weak
Some are lazy
While some are beasts
 Many are greedy
And some care for the pack

2 comments:

  1. Good comparision. Seems like a very abupt end you may want to add another line.

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  2. This sort of personification of the animal kingdom is rank in this age of modern poetry, and I condemn you for this vulgar poem. Other than that, this poem was great.

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